Diary for Colt Ruth - lead character in All or Nothing
The year 1678
23rd August 1678
This year, this day has been the greatest day of my life. I'm now a father to a beautiful baby girl. It makes my job a little harder, i now have to provide for her rather than just my wife and I. I promised her that i will protect them from anything no matter what it takes and no matter what it costs i will do anything for her. When my wife was sleeping i played a tune to my girl, she smiled.
Todays exercise was to write an opening of the diary for the main character. This helps us understand our characters more than just setting them around a actor you want to play them.
my feedback:
It is good, and it makes you want things to go right for him. But, Its hard to see this as a western film.