Tuesday, 17 September 2013

First script - Oak Killer

                           OAK KILLER

FADE IN:

INT. OLD WOODEN CABIN 

                           
Sound of heavy wooden door SLOWLY opening. 


JANE appears from behind the door and closes it behind her on. On the phone. JANE is 19 years old. She is wearing a black crop top. holding a paper bag full of shopping close to her chest. 

                             
                                JANE
        I told, I will be fine on my own. 
      Its only for the night. 


DARREN's beep voice reply's on the other end of the phone.


DARREN
(on the phone)
Are you sure? I don't mind staying with you for the night if it will make you will saver? 


The phone line is SILENT 

JANE
Hello? 
Darren? 
Are you there? 
Hello?


JANE puts down the paper bag on the kitchen counter.
She tries to re-cell DARREN. 
Phone beeps. she places the phone down on the counter 
The door bell rings and JANE turns.


Track starts.


EXT. OUTSIDE CABIN - MIDNIGHT
FADE IN 
INT. INSIDE THE KITCHEN

Phone rings. JANE turns to pick up phone off the counter.


JANE
Hello?

Track stops
HEAVY breathing at the other end of the phone.
Track starts

 JANE
Darren is that you?


Heavy breathing continues 
Track stops 

DEEP VOICE ANSWERS
Its your worst nightmare.

                              
                           




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