Rewritten conversation between two characters and feedback

NEW ONE!!!!

ELISABETH:

Is that sweet enough?

HOWARD:

Yeah thanks3, why is it that every time I visit Cult is not here?

ELISABETH:

I know, his always off working and doesn’t come home till sunset.

HOWARD:

Does that man ever take a holiday?

ELISABETH:

His a worker, its all he knows, wakes up, works sleeps. He won’t take a break in his life. Its just not him.

HOWARD:

He needs to understand that people won’t think less of him if he just takes a step back and relaxes for once in his life. Don’t worry too much about him, its in his blood.

ELISABETH:

I know but as a wife it’s a normal thing to be worry.

Feedback 

The New one is very good it shows a more Informal view on the original script which would be understandable if they knew each other

I like both of the scrips, I prefer the new one

I like Both scripts but i prefer the new one as it's got more detail in what the characters say

I think you've done the work very well, you're sentences are not that short and you still managed to mean the exact same things in both dialogues. Ris

FROM SAM LOLS

The second one seems more real! Like i can picturing it happening.

Own note:

I prefer the new one because i really had to think about every word i was putting in because i wanted to get the same idea across but didnt want the words to be simple.