Monday, 16 June 2014

no dialogue: all or nothing

all or nothing

INT. THE VIRGINIA BANK

COLT RUTH and MOTHER RUTH walk into the Virginia bank, colt in a black suit that hardly fits, his mother in a long purple dress. the bank filled with people wearing suits and smart clothing.

A mountain of people fill the hall of the bank and separate into line to a window. (the banks fans sound gets louder and louder, the sound of flies buzzing around in the hot Virginia heat)

fades to a clock at 1 (clock moving)

then fade to the clock at 2 til 4pm

Mother ruth and Colt are finally at the window (the sound of the bank workers fingers counting the money and putting it into his desk.

as the man finishes counting the doors of the bank bust open.

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